For me, it was a mess.
I dig Onomatopoeia and I like when a creator gets to work on his creation, but this... it didn't please me.
I'm with you. I don't even know that I got all the way through the first issue. All three are downstairs, but I just don't have the interest to get them. And I was a huge Kevin Smith fan for a long time. In fact, I still love his movies.
This just didn't grab me at any point beyond the solicit copy. Of course he picks this series to get done on time, so I have to buy all three issues, because they've all been ordered.