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Re: Strips4 general thread! 3rd World, Public Education, Hellidays, Comic Curve
« Reply #520 on: 07:05 PM | Sunday, May 15, 2011 »
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Re: Strips4 general thread! 3rd World, Public Education, Hellidays, Comic Curve
« Reply #521 on: 03:05 PM | Monday, May 16, 2011 »
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Awful is pissed! 
What students don't know at that age is after you say please and the person doesn't give up the chair, you kick them out. Evict them. That's from the Miss Manners guide to etiquette. 
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Re: Strips4 general thread! 3rd World, Public Education, Hellidays, Comic Curve
« Reply #522 on: 07:05 PM | Friday, May 20, 2011 »
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Re: Strips4 general thread! 3rd World, Public Education, Hellidays, Comic Curve
« Reply #523 on: 08:05 PM | Friday, May 20, 2011 »
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Hey, Tim, FYI the link isn't working - at least, not for me.
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Re: Strips4 general thread! 3rd World, Public Education, Hellidays, Comic Curve
« Reply #524 on: 09:05 PM | Friday, May 20, 2011 »
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Took a look at the page and love the direction the story's going. I think you've made a lot of strides in your art, but think you could still benefit from greater contrast. You rely on color to distinguish one object from the next and don't often give thought to the values. I messed around with the first two panels. I also noticed you rarely do close ups so I added one of those.
I'm messing around with grey scale and will post that later.
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Re: Strips4 general thread! 3rd World, Public Education, Hellidays, Comic Curve
« Reply #525 on: 04:05 PM | Saturday, May 21, 2011 »
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Fixed the link, thanks for the heads up. Thank you for the comments on the art too, I love contrast but I ink very lightly. It's the damnedest thing but I'm trying to overcome it.
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Re: Strips4 general thread! 3rd World, Public Education, Hellidays, Comic Curve
« Reply #526 on: 07:05 AM | Monday, May 23, 2011 »
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Re: Strips4 general thread! 3rd World, Public Education, Hellidays, Comic Curve
« Reply #527 on: 04:05 PM | Tuesday, May 24, 2011 »
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Sorry I broke the site temporarily, if you're trying to get there you'll need to use the squarespace url. Sorry.
http://strips4.squarespace.com/
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Re: Strips4 general thread! 3rd World, Public Education, Hellidays, Comic Curve
« Reply #528 on: 05:06 AM | Thursday, June 02, 2011 »
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I love the latest updates, John. How's it feel to be on sandwich patrol?
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Re: Strips4 general thread! 3rd World, Public Education, Hellidays, Comic Curve
« Reply #529 on: 07:06 AM | Thursday, June 02, 2011 »
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It was an assistant who was labeled a sandwich officer, I just found it hilarious. Personally I just want them to eat their ice creams before they melt.
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Re: Strips4 general thread! 3rd World, Public Education, Hellidays, Comic Curve
« Reply #530 on: 09:06 PM | Saturday, June 04, 2011 »
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Re: Strips4 general thread! 3rd World, Public Education, Hellidays, Comic Curve
« Reply #531 on: 06:06 AM | Sunday, June 05, 2011 »
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Those elves are tough!
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Re: Strips4 general thread! 3rd World, Public Education, Hellidays, Comic Curve
« Reply #533 on: 05:06 AM | Thursday, June 09, 2011 »
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Great Comic Curve, Jon. Everything was nicely explained and all good advice. Public Education was hilarious. It makes you wonder if there should be No Teacher Left Behind legislation. And poor Awful just can't catch a break!
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Re: Strips4 general thread! 3rd World, Public Education, Hellidays, Comic Curve
« Reply #534 on: Yesterday at 09:15 AM »
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Re: Strips4 general thread! 3rd World, Public Education, Hellidays, Comic Curve
« Reply #535 on: Yesterday at 02:13 PM »
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Jon, Comic Curve and Public Education look great. Awful is comin gup with an error.
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Re: Strips4 general thread! 3rd World, Public Education, Hellidays, Comic Curve
« Reply #536 on: Yesterday at 02:19 PM »
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Re: Strips4 general thread! 3rd World, Public Education, Hellidays, Comic Curve
« Reply #537 on: Today at 10:44 AM »
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Re: Strips4 general thread! 3rd World, Public Education, Hellidays, Comic Curve
« Reply #538 on: Today at 12:15 PM »
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I think you stepped your game up on this page Tim.  Karma.
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Re: Strips4 general thread! 3rd World, Public Education, Hellidays, Comic Curve
« Reply #539 on: Today at 02:32 PM »
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I'll second that! I like that you're using more blacks on the page. I really enjoyed the reflection on the sword.
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